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Friday, July 15, 2011

Project Synopsis


With my research paper I am looking at the comparison and contradiction of human trafficking and Colonial slavery in Europe. There are many things that are different and then there are many things that are the same between these two different things that happened at very different time periods. Some of the things that are different are the ways that they got to the places that they are going. The things that they experienced, what the public view of the situation is, and how they were able to get out of the situation that they were placed into.
The first thing that I talked about in my paper is exactly how these slaves got to these new places to live out the rest of their lives in hell. For the colonial times there were people that took these many Africans on ships and transported them that way to these new places. There are two different slave trades that occurring during the time of African slavery and I look into both of them and how they are both very much the same and at the same time they are different in their own little ways. The Mediterranean and the Atlantic slave trade also happened in different time periods but because they are dealing with the same kind of slavery you can kind many similarities and differences. When it comes to human trafficking it is not that easy. During the colonial times slavery was considered legal for many years. But human trafficking from the beginning was considered illegal which means that many have to hide and the best way to hide your “merchandise” is to drive to these other countries from the places that you picked up the girls from.
The next thing that I talked about in my paper is the experience that the many different slaves went through. Every slave is going to have different experiences but at the same time they are going to have the same. The difference that they have is where they were, if they worked on a field, in the house, or on a ship. The other thing that is different is whether they were female or male. That made the difference if they were going to be the personal slaves of their male master or if they were just going to be the slave of their masters’ children. The things that made them the same were the kinds of punishment that they got and the way they were overall treated.
The next thing that I talked about is how they got out of this experience and live the rest of their lives. Of course the information that I am using is coming from slaves that were able to get out of the situation that they were in but many were not that lucky. There were many people that were not able to tell their story to others because they would die before they could see the better part of life once again. For all of them getting out of the situations that they were in was not easy no matter what the time period was. The most common for both of the time periods was them running away but the difference is how they ran away and got away from these people that were doing harm to them.
Another thing that is easy to compare is the way that the public views what is going on around them. During the colonial times the people were more accepting to the things that were going on around them especially if were where a white person living in Europe. When it comes to human trafficking today it is not that easy. From the beginning governments have been trying to stop human trafficking and the things that it is doing to people. Governments and even religious groups are doing everything that they can in order to stop this.
With the last thing that I talk about is how colonial slavery ended and looking at all the things that are the same and different then we can look at how people or organizations can end human trafficking forever even though it is not that easy. Colonial Slavery didn’t end in one day. It was ended over many years and after many people fought for it. When it comes to human trafficking it is very different. These people are being sold for sex which is something that is not going to go away any time soon.

3 comments:

  1. You have chosen a very interesting topic. This is a nice outline of your argument specific information is lacking. I am also interested to see what sources you have chosen to integrate to support your thesis. Thank you for your submission!

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  2. Overall I like the idea of your paper, but I do have a few things I think would help improve your grade for your final topic! While normally I try to stay away from grammar rules, my critique may fit somewhat into that. There are a few times in your paper where you give vague words like "things" pretty often. While I won't critique the use of the word "things" I think you could get so much more out of your paper, and you would even extend the length of your paper if you explained what those "things" are instead of writing that word. It would draw me in as a reader much more, and it would expand the topic a bit! Basically, like amber said, the outline is there and it is a good idea for a paper, but the lack of information is noticeable. Just fix that a bit and I think you'll be good to go!

    Also, like Amber somewhat mentioned, your sources are very important, so don't forget to bring them up on your paper! I am actually interested in this topic, so I might like to see what you used myself. Either way, Good luck on your paper!

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  3. The structure of your paper looks good and the overall topic and message is clear in the hypothesis. For the last sentence in your first paragraph I would somehow connect the two to form one hypothesis. Most of the information that you wrote about was clear I would just touch on the points a little bit more and explain how they actually got there. Such as rather than just saying on “they were transported on Ships” explain how slaves were first abducted from their land and then go on about life on a slave ship. It would help elongate your paper and really make your message clear. Also, make sure to cite all of your information to really give that extra validity to your information. Overall I think this will turn out to be a great paper and I look forward to reading it!

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